That's some big file 400+ pages. I'll read some of it, looks like fun.
I wonder, how would such a system be set up today? Obviously, with modern cameras, the weight and power consumption would go down, sothey could be made much smarter. Perhaps two cameras with "intelligent" tracking skills, one for each astronaut? HD, of course. And with automatic antenna tracking to keep contact with Earth. Local recording capability, so even if contact was lost, footage could be uploaded automatically when contact was renewed.
Also, lots of the hardware could be made from lightweight plastic - or carbon fiber perhaps? Modern composites have much more strength for the same weight. How do they work in vacuum? And temperature fluctuations?