Here is another one on the top of page 128. He discusses his extracting the LM out of the S-IVB. Then goes on to say,"we were then ready to do the module checks, get ourselves away from the S-IVB and send it packing, and prepare for a timely TLI." The TLI burn was performed by the S-IVB before extracting the module.
With simple errors like these, the book just can't be taken seriously. I wonder what the CTers will do with it.