Are you sure you looked at the entire pdf as there is more than a single page?
I have the entire paper. My point is that, having proceeded no farther than the first page, I already have encountered materials that require your attention.
I claim that the apollo craft had no dedicated shielding...
That is not the claim to which I refer. When we were discussing the materials used for shielding, you insisted that shielding had to be composed of hydrogen-rich materials. I pointed out that aluminum was commonly used as a radiation shielding material. You responded that this was impossible because it would produce secondary radation, presumably in unsustainable amounts. If you accept this author as an expert, and this author says that aluminum is commonly used as a shielding material, do you concede that you were wrong when you claimed it wasn't, or couldn't be?
Further, you suggested last night and then today that a translunar trajectory would have to pass through the Van Allen belts. You pooh-poohed depictions of the orbital geometry as having been "drawn in crayon for children." Yet your author here agrees that there was an "elegant" way of flying the trajectory that avoided all but the fringes of the trapped radiation. If you accept this author as an expert, do you concede that your dismissal of Apollo trajectories was premature and not properly informed?